Children Convicted of Crimes in Adult Prisons
Thesis: There are more negative consequences of
sending a child convicted of a crime to an adult prison than there is
positive.
Research Question: Should children convicted a crime be placed in adult correctional
facility?
Body Paragraph #1: The history of a juvenile center.
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Explain
why a juvenile center was put in place
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Analyze
how children convicted of crimes decades ago were treated
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Give
general background information of laws enforced affected children
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Include
the supreme court of when children were granted legal rights in a legal court
room
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(This
will be about 2 paragraphs)
Body Paragraph #2:
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I will be
explaining the consequences of children be locked in adult prisons
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The high
rates of sexual assault
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Evaluate
why there is a high rate of suicide among teens placed in adult prisons
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The lack
of protection
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The lack
of programs provided to help these troubled teens cope with life after
their sentence
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(This
will be about 2 or more body paragraphs)
Body Paragraph #3
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This
portion of the essay will discuss and elaborate on the idea that adult prisons
are not suitable for a teen who is still developing
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The lack
of regulation leaves children unsupervised and easily targeted
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There are
a lot of teens who are placed in adult prisons and have not committed a violent
crime
Body Paragraph #4: Explain why Juvenile Center is a better option
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Discuss
the benefits of a juvenile detention center
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Explain
the difference between an adult prison and a juvenile center
Conclusion:
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Revaluate
my previous ideas by restating my thesis
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Explain
the position I agree with after my research
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My final
thoughts on the topic of adult and adolescents sharing a jail cell
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