The sample research paper, “Out of
Shadows” was very informative and well written. The writer explained and
organized the essay in a way that it was easy to read and understand. The
introduction had an intriguing hook and described the two terms that were
discussed throughout the essay, which is slavery and human trafficking. Ending
human trafficking is extremely hard because it is worldwide. The first body
paragraph allows the reader to understand in detail what is the true definition
of trafficking and slavery and how people get these two ideas confused.
Including real accounts of women
who have been in the ring of trafficking gives the essay an emotional appeal.
As a girl I sympathize with these women who had dreams and were fooled by
cowardly men who promised them a prosperous future. These men take advantage of
poor innocent young girls and they are the ones who need to be locked up.
Incriminating these victims for prosecution is cruel. Most of these girls are
scared for their lives and families and fear that if they tell an officer the
cops will not believe them. The conclusion was just as strong as the
introduction and I think it was very captivating. The overall essay was very
strong and the thesis was clear.
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